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Hilarious!

For a second there, I thought this was going to be a serious piece. When the humour started, it was so unexpected that I just about fell out of my chair! Good stuff! Excellent job!

Excellent Sprite Toon!

I'm becoming more impressed with the ever increasing amount of well made sprite toons on NG! This is no exception! The sprites are clean, the sound is awesome, the music fits and the story is well told. My only crit would be to either make Bass' text a different color or enclose it in a balloon because it was hard to read against the background.

A great job overall! Your talent for and dedication to making awesome Flash toons shows! Keep up the excellent work!

CheveLoco responds:

yeah i have fixed the text for the 5th part

Not Bad For A First Go With Sprites!

You created some slick animation here with sprites. Good job! Not many people grasp that as effectively as you have their first time out. Come up with a storyline and I'll definitely keep checking your stuff out! Good luck!

CElion responds:

Thanks! =) And yes, I plan on making another flash after I finish this off with an actual story.

One Of The Few Good Previews On NG

This preview made me want to see more which is exactly what a preview's supposed to do! So few animators on NG understand that concept, but you hit it right on the head! With the exceptional art, slick animation and obvious comic violence, I look forward to the series! Best of luck!

ReQsa responds:

Hey, thanks.... The series itself, will be much better!

Tips

SPRITES - Good job ripping the sprites. They were very clean and slick looking as were the backgrounds. When animating them, make sure you keep them in the same natural position. There was a bit of shift as they moved.
SOUND - Optimize. It's what's making this file so fat. NG has a tutorial on how to optimize your sound. The "Battle Against Clown" track from the "Akira" film is a great music choice, but it needs to be used in better context. I would also suggest using voice actors since it adds more depth to the piece.
PACING - Right now, it's very slow. Try cutting the scenes a bit tighter to more of an even flow.

This is a good effort and, with some improvement, the next installments will be something to look forward to. Good luck!

Very Well Done!

The sprites were expertly animated, the sound fx were spot on, the music was great, the pacing was well timed and the story was interesting. This shows an obvious dedication to Flash sprite animation. Your effort and patience really shows. EXCELLENT JOB! I look forward to the next installment!

Dark-Vincent responds:

Whoooa!! Thanks man!!!

Better Than "The Matrix: Reloaded"!

This fight scene was more interesting and exciting than any of the fight scenes in TM:R!

This was very funny and entertaining! I thought the "bullet time" scenes were especially hilarious and inspired!

I'm going to make sure I miss the last installment of "The Matrix", but you can bet I'll be here for the next chapter of ".The Catrix." if there is one!

Not Too Shabby!

I'm not used to people actually giving voices to sprites on NG so this was refreshing. Though the piece is a tad too short, the voices were clear and well acted, the animated sprites moved smoothly and the humour was there. This is a good effort! Make more!

It's Okay

This piece shows some effort. The building explosions were impressive if not a bit overdone. The pacing was very slow. Try editing your scenes a bit tighter like the street scene where the paper blows by. Also, optimize your sound. This piece shouldn't be 3meg for what we get. Sound effects for the alien ray would have also added a nice touch.

Overall, it's an honest effort and I respect that. I wish you the best of luck with your next project!

Just When I Thought Sticks Couldn't Be Original

This piece is BRILLIANT! A truly excellent and and inspired use of stick figures. The animation was slick, the sound effects were funny and on cue and the story was VERY clever! I laughed out loud! Very well done! Awesome job!

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