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[DBZ Alpha Remake]

If You Want To Make A Parody Piece ...

... come up with something original. This is obviously "Lizard Sphere X" except your file size is about 20x larger and tells the same story!
Work on your pacing. You spent too much time on the power up scene and the group reaction shots. The fight was also very ridged and lacked any real action.
When creating Flash cartoons, keep your file size in mind. This piece did not need to be 4meg.
Finally, instead of ripping off other people's projects, watch more DBZ and find something else to poke fun at - there's a lot there!

[Lizard Sphere X]

Saw This Because Of A Blatant Rip-Off!

I saw "DBZ Alpha Remake" by Atomic-Attack-Calvin and read in one of the reviews that he had ripped you off. Now that I've seen this piece, I can confirm that. This piece is funny, well timed, the art ROCKS and it has a small file size. This has everything the rip-off doesn't and it's 4meg!

In a way, I'm glad someone made a knock-off of this because a) it shows it was a good idea and b) I probably never would have seen this one.

[Sultan the Jihadi Gerbil]

FUNNY!

From the well timed setup to the punchline, this piece had a lot of funny bits! A well made toon!

[crappy crappytips]

Not Bad

If you ever find yourself using Flash again (traditional animation is definitely doable in Flash), reduce the file size of your music so the piece isn't so large. You should add a "replay" button at the end so it doesn't automatically loop. As it is now, the music sounds more and more hammered each time it loops over itself. Also, work on your timing because the last title card only appears for a second. The art is pretty cool and it's obvious you've got some talent in this arena. Hopefully, you'll produce more and post it here on NG!

[The Suitcase]

Nice And Neat

Every player and prop had their moment and were all neatly tied together in this excellent piece of storytelling. It's a nice walk on the bizarre side. Brilliant!

[The Course - part 2]

Pretty Smooth

Very good use of frame by frame! The roughly drawn style of the stick figures adds some personality to 'em. Good work!