DocMonster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Taishi - Jujitsu Sword]

Tighter Than A Robin's Tweet!

This movie flowed EXTREMELY well! It never got boring because it always kept its focus. You have an excellent sense of storytelling and action. Keep up the awesome work!

[Rabbits]

Thanks For Explaining It!

I've always wondered how they did that! ; )

The rabbit animation was excellent whether it was "rotoscoped" or freehand frame-by-frame. It showed you put forth the time and the effort to make a classic Flash toon! Good job!

Sherbalex responds:

It was all 100% freehand my good sir. I HATE animations that are 100% tweening, it's just not animation damn it!

[Vampire Tales]

Holy Spoot!

I can't believe this piece was only a little over a meg! Excellent job!

[Burglar#1]

You Show Promise

The things that hurt this piece are your file size and the extremely slow storytelling. The file size is huge because of your sound. Learn to drop the file size of your sounds before importing them into Flash. Transitions from scene to scene take too long. Edit your projects a bit tighter so there's not so much lag time between scenes. This is how you spell "BURGLAR". Since you mentioned you were going for realism with the tiny drip from the faucet, you might want to make sure you add the hot and cold taps to the sink as well.
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Hopefully this didn't come off as harsh. You've got a lot of potential to be a good Flash animator and you definitely put your time into this project. Best of luck with the next piece!

PWU responds:

Yeah, haha i figured i spelt it wrong, but by then it was too late -how embarrasing- oh well. Thanks for the comments, i'll try to figure out how to compress sound etc. and how to make a bar for the pre-loader. This is the first time i submitted something online, so I know it aint in the greatest shape.

[Mr. BoomBa Ep.2]

A-joo Chemi-itnun Man-hwa!

The overall cartoon is excellent!!! The sound effects are PERFECT, the art style really works and the storytelling is flawless! GREAT JOB! Kwenchansimneeda!

[drunk elephant]

And This Is Why ...

... elephants should not drink in public! This is one well made funny toon! The animation was spot on and the story kept moving. Excellent work!

[Paper Wars]

Genius!

From the spot on sound effects to the AMAZING frame-by-frame animation, this piece is a work of GENIUS! The humour was VERY clever and the artwork was superb! Simply excellent! GREAT JOB!!!

[-=[ ON THE RUN ]=-]

Well Done!

This is very well made and it proves that taking the time to do something right is worth the effort. Excellent job! Keep 'em comin'!

[Hell On The Highway]

Psychotic Humour!!!

I LOVE PSYCHOTIC HUMOUR!!! The art was a little crude, but it REALLY WORKS! It added to the overall effect of the piece. This is one funny Flash toon! Keep 'em comin'!

[Tales of the Scarecrow]

BRILLIANT MASTERPIECE!!!

There are absolutely no flaws in this toon! The marriage of both 3D graphics and traditional animation is superb! The art style was excellent, the pacing was smooth and the sound was spot on! BRAVO! ENCORE!