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[What The Hell]

Two Things

1) You need to learn how to use Flash
2) The artist is Gene Kelly not Frank Sinatra

[1920's]

Your Project Needs:

1) A Preloader - I guess I missed the title since the first word I saw on the screen was "By". A preloader will keep the project from playing until it's fully loaded.
2) Narration - pictures flashing on the screen don't cut it and music with no narration track won't help this piece be coherent.
3) Keep the last collage from moving - it jumps and you only need to say "The End" once.
4) Font - ditch the chunky font for one that's more indicative of the 20's.
I hope this helps! The pictures are fine and they show up rather well. Good luck on the project!

[don't bite your tounge]

Not Too Shabby!

I'm not a fan of stick figure movies, but at least you gave these sticks some personality! This was short, tight and to the point with smart usage of tweening. Not bad! Keep it up!

[The Untelevised Olympics]

FUNNY!!!

I laughed out loud - especially during the snow angel competition! Excellent work!

[Toonslayer]

I Am Traumatized & I Enjoyed It!

High marks go to the artwork! It looked awesome! Well done!

[test``2]

A Little Too Much Cowboy Bebop

I understand this piece was inspired by Cowboy Bebop, but the sound and the scene change style ARE Cowboy Bebop. Authors have created projects based on inspiration from other sources like Corman did with "Battle Beyond the Stars" (inspired by "The Seven Samurai" which also inspired "The Magnificent Seven"), but these derivatives hold their own. Take your inspiration from Cowboy Bebop, but do your best to pay homage to it and not rip it off. Hopefully your series will tell a story that comes from you and not CB. I look forward to seeing you improve.

figma responds:

dont worry i was drivin to make a intro for my series it has nothing and i mean nothing to do with cowboybebop ive only seen the show 3 times and i liked the intro so i made one :) i went skiing for a week and on the drive and at night i wrote the scrip for the story it will be 5 or was it 6 chapters long with hopefully 3D effects. i just got back and read this review and i understand excatly where your coming from! :) thanks for reviewing it and once again if anyone wants to be part of prj. figma i need someone with voice talent soon or i will be fourced to...(sheds a tear) use text for diolage!!!!!ahh but hope is not yet done im leaving 5 or 6 days for someone to e-mail me at [e-mail] or [e-mail] or figmata77 is my AIM screen name. after that time spand i will use text :'( thanks for the great votes ive been getting once again! peace people

[Sven's Magical Christmas]

WOW! Cats ARE Useful!

I found this piece disturbingly funny. It was like watching a car wreck ... I just ... I just ... COULDN'T TURN AWAY! Now to watch it five more times!

[Afghani Air Force 2]

Well Done!

Very clever and quite funny! I thought the smiley faced "pilots" added a bizarre touch.

[Brendon & Gerrard Show 01]

This Has Potential

The file size is too big for what you have. The fat sound files are killing you so drop the quality on 'em a bit. When recording voices, back up off the microphone because the sound is getting distorted. Your mouth should be at least one fist width from the mic. Next time, write a script that's paced better. The humour is definitely there, but the timing's off. I know this all seems negative, but it's obvious that you have talent and I'd like to see you do better. The green skull t-shirt guy is HILARIOUS for the simple fact that he can't act and sounds like he's reading! You have to have him in more episodes! Keep 'em comin'!

[A Spider Story]

New Spin On An Old Theme

The true test of a good imagination is taking something that's been done before and making it fresh. This project does that. The fact that the main characters are spiders makes this piece both bizarre and funny. I really liked it!