It May Be Short ...
... but it's still entertaining! I like the funky character designs and the animation is great! I look forward to seeing more from you!
It May Be Short ...
... but it's still entertaining! I like the funky character designs and the animation is great! I look forward to seeing more from you!
EXCELLENT!!!
The file size is small for what we get, which is a lot! It's a very impressive use of memory! The voice acting is outstanding! The timing is perfect and the comedy had me laughing out loud! The art style is slick and the animation is well done! A most excellent project! Keep 'em coming!
WOW!!!
That was very clever and hilarious! Can't wait for the saga to continue!!!
Shocking ...
... yet very impressive! Very Faces of Death! Keep it up! Uh ... I mean "the good work" not ... uh ... killing yourself ... ah, hell ...
Excellent!
The entire piece is well done! The humour hit all the right beats, the action was well timed, the art style fits the story and the backgrounds work! Awesome job!
Damn Clowns!
The art is very clean and the way in which this is presented is perfect! Excellent work!!!
Sound
The sound needs work. It comes across too muddy and it may be because the volume in your .FLA file is set too high. Edit the sound in Flash so that the bottom of the first envelope handle is touching the center line. It'll still keep it loud, but it'll sound clearer. Hope this helps!
No Need For Improvement!
This is great the way it is!
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If you want to add a little more, drop in some classical romantic music and then top it with a big wet "SPLAT!" sound effect when the time comes.
Thanks a lot, the romantic music idea is excellent. Will do.
Never Apologize
According to your Author's Comments: "when you vote please keep in mind that this was experimental for me, i learned flash through the tutorials and dont really have any hardware to produce some proffesional looking work besides my mouse. Its kinda big and i apologize for that."
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I guess it may be the promotional side of me, but if you believe in something enough to present it to the public, you should do so proudly without making excuses for yourself or the project - it'll speak for itself.
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This piece DOES speak for itself and it tells me you know and like what you're doing! I also have to admit you hooked me by using the music from ARMY OF DARKNESS. The file size is small for what we get and that's VERY impressive in and of itself since most other amateurs would have made this for at least a meg! You create good Flash, so be proud of it! I hope to see more from you soon!
In dark of night, a flash of light, a werewolf howls, a monster growls, the village sleeps, the creature creeps, the scalpel stabs in Doc Monster Labs!
Age 55, Male
Freelance Cartoonist
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Doc Monster Labs, NJ
Joined on 7/31/01